What is missing from our production?

As I recently uploaded, me and my partner have created our first rough edit of our production. This is so we know where we are at with our production and so we can have a clear insight into what we need to add. Below is a list of what we need to add to improve our production.

1. We need to add music to the production to make the piece more authentic and in order to make it make more sense
2. We need to add a few more clips that we have filmed recently into the production to correctly order the production and make sure it flows freely.
3. We need to remove some clips that don't really fit in. 
4. We need to re edit a few bits because we think it might make the viewers loose interest as some of the transitions are a bit jumpy making them seem out of place.
5. We need to make sure that all the clips in the production fit together and make sure it runs smoothly.  
6. We need to add text to some parts of the production such as a title which we are still debating whether it should go at the start of the production or at the end.